ZE RULES:
Search the words “moment,” “forever,” “time,” or the like in your writing, pick your favorite chunk, post on your blog, and tag others!
Well, okay. Let's see what happens when I search "time" in my stress-free WiP, DRAGON FAIL :)
One of the settings in this MS is a tourist attraction called "Questland," which is pretty much an indoor medieval theme park on the oceanfront. This might be one of my favorite random passages from it :P
Enjoy!
Darien
totally felt like a loser in these tights. For the past few days, Darien had been a loser ---which was weird,
‘cause usually he was the opposite of that. He was a winner. His whole family
was made up of winners.
But
then that text from Meg came. That’s all it took to make him a loser: one text.
Mark was always a better kisser, anyway.
The words were burned into his mind, and he fought to throw his phone for the
fiftieth time. Or maybe it was the seventy-seventh. It’s not like he was
counting. His fists clenched as he avoided the full-length mirror in front of
him.
It
had all started with this stupid summer job. If his dad hadn’t forced him to be
responsible, he’d still be dating the hottest girl in school. Now all he had
was his straight-A average and the quarterback position that would get him a
full-ride to the college of his choice next fall. Not terrible, but it’s not
like he could make-out with a football. Jim tried that once, and it didn’t end
well.
Though
mastering the art of making out with a football might’ve been a better way to
spend the next few months. He wasn’t even going to do anything cool for the
summer. He’d just be some tool in tights welcoming tourists to Questland’s
maze.
He
gave the full-length mirror an exaggerated bow. Might as well practice his
stupid speech. “Take no pictures, use no phones, for here monsters and dragons
do roam. Though if you find you need assistance, find the path of least
resistance. There a member of our Court is sure to help, but if you raise a
false alarm, you’ll be kicked out.” He paused. That didn’t rhyme. He shook his
head, continuing. “Now, I beseech you to enter this maze with caution, and hope
that your time at Questland is unbelievably awesome.”
HAH. This is so adorable! <3 ILU Darien.
ReplyDeletehahaha Darien is quite lovable :P Glad you thought it was adorable <3
DeleteOkay this sounds AWESOME. I totally want to read it!
ReplyDeleteWheeeeeeeeeee! And you shall read it :) Once I have finished le draft haha
DeleteMe too! Cool premise!
ReplyDeleteAwww, thanks! You are one of my most trusted betas, so of course I'll send it to you when it's ready! :)
DeleteYou know how much I loves this :)
ReplyDelete<33333 yes I do :D
DeleteAnd you know how much I loves you!
Questland!? I like the sound of that.
ReplyDelete:) I needed a fun but sort of generic sounding name for the place! Took a bit of inspiration from a spot sort of like it in Tennessee!
Delete1) This is cute.
ReplyDelete2) YOUR MC IS NAMED DARIEN?! I DIE.
1) :D :D :D It is the exact opposite of R&B, and I love it for that (though I do still love R&B quite a bit, of course!)
Delete2) YES! All those Sailor Moon rewatches meant this was inevitable. When I started writing it back in October, he was "Darren," I think. But I like Darien a bit better :P